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Bericht van Chieana Strider di apr 08, 2008 9:42 pm

hihi, ik doe mijn best, egt waar ^^
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Bericht van tess92 di apr 08, 2008 9:49 pm

Zal wel rustig w8tte
heeft tijd Very Happy
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Bericht van Chieana Strider di apr 08, 2008 9:57 pm

ok, ik sal alvast een preview geven Wink

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“Chieana!”, Meckro screamed. He looked around in surprise. He saw and heared nothing.

Personages
Meckro
Flora *nieuw*
Thegolas *surprise Wink*

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Bericht van tess92 di apr 08, 2008 10:02 pm

oeioei oei
was daar aan de hand is
*is nieuwschierig naar vervolg *
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Bericht van tess92 di apr 08, 2008 10:03 pm

wwwwhhhhhiiiiieeee
nieuwe rang Very Happy
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Bericht van Chieana Strider di apr 08, 2008 10:05 pm

gefeliciteerd ^^ ik ben byna klaar...nog 1 bladzijde over typen xD
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Bericht van tess92 di apr 08, 2008 10:07 pm

jeeeej
dan kan ik weer ff lezen
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Bericht van Gast di apr 08, 2008 10:49 pm

wow,dees is chic geschreve ze! Surprised

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Bericht van Chieana Strider di apr 08, 2008 11:44 pm

dnkj ^^ ik moest net huiswerk maken dus het schrijven is uitgesteld, ik sal het morgenochtend posten ^^ *promise*
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Bericht van Chieana Strider wo apr 09, 2008 12:52 am

ik kan nu (al) posten ^^

Part 3

Meckro ran to the elves who were capturing orks. “Where did she go!”, he screamed. The elves didn’t knew. He sighed. “Now I need to find her again.”, he said. “Go back to work! She won’t come that soon again!”, he said to the elves. “If she really is Chieana.”, he whispered to himself. He walked back to the waterfall. “Where are you this time, Chieana.”, he said out loud. Then he heared a voice in his head. “I’m at the dragons. A lot went wrong during my absence. Because of your brother!”, the voice screamed. “Chieana!”, Meckro screamed. He looked around in surprise. He saw and heared nothing. He sighed and sat down. He wondered if Chieana could read all of his minds. He thought about his brother. Why does he always wants to kill the dragons? And why didn’t his dad do something about it? There was something going on, he was sure. “But what?”, he asked himself. There walked a little reptile towarts him. It had the size of a cat. It had dark scales on it’s back and the belly was bright, unmistakable, light blue. “What am I supposed to do? Where to start?”, he said to the little creature. He frowned. “And now I’m even talking to animals. I really am desperate.”, he said to himself. The little creature sat on his lap and looked interrested at him. He looked with surprise at the creature. “You understand me?”, he asked. The creature nodded. Meckro thought for a few seconds. “Do you know Thegolas?”, he asked the creature. The creature looked at him with extreme fear and nodded. “Like that.”, he said. “He’s my brother, but I hate him. The only thing he does in life is embitter my life and kill all dragons in the world.”, he said. The creature looked at him with sympathy. “Do you have a name?”, he asked. The creature shook it’s head. “Can I call you Flora?”, he asked. The creature nodded with pleasure. Meckro laughed. “My name is Meckro. It’s a pleasure to meet you, Flora”, siad Meckro to Flora. Flora curled herself in Meckro’s lap. Flora felt asleep. Meckro smiled. He finaly had a good friend. “Meckro?”, a very familiar voice said. “Meckro, wake up!”, the voice said. Meckro opened his eyes and looked into his brother’s eyes. “What’s wrong?”, he asked. “Aren’t you hurt? It didn’t attack you?”, Thegolas asked. “No, what happend then?”, Meckro asked. “You were attacked by a dragon!”, Thegolas screamed. “It ran off before I could capture it, but I will find it!”, Thegolas said determined. Meckro sighed and walked back to the valley. He slowly realised that he fell asleep. He frowned. Elves only sleep 1 á 2 times a year, why did he fell alseep then? He hadn’t felt tired at all. He thought back at Flora. Would she have survived the attack from the dragon? Thegolas hadn’t mentioned her. She probaly fled away. Just like everyone else around him. Except from Thegolas. There was more going on, but what? He felt alone and abandoned. He was nothing without Chieana. Why did he had to fall in love with her? The only person in the universe that wasn’t able to fall in love. On these moments, he hated himself. The only thing he thought about were her black hairs and her moves when she walked. Though her hair was always clitty. And her laugh. He almost melted away. She hadn’t really laughed since she was the little inexperienced girl from fourteen years old. The little girl wich he always had to take care of, from Ithidro. He never understood why. He still didn’t knew. He smiled. Chieana always called Ithidro Ithi or grandpa. He went inside the villa and laid himself on the bed. He felt just like a little kid. It looked like they tried to hide something from him. And that was for everyone, even Chieana was hiding something. But what was it? He sighed and closed his eyes. He felt, again, asleep. “Meckro...”, Chieana whispered. Meckro opened his eyes and saw Chieana laying on him. She softly started kissing him in his neck. “This is a dream.”, Meckro said. “Then let it be a good dream.”, Chieana whispered in his ears and she bite in his earlobe. He sighed and the image disapeared. He woke up on the guest bed. He opened his eyes and saw his brother coming in. “What?”, he asked. “Nothing”, Thegolas said and he walked out of the room. Meckro looked surprised at him while he walked out of the room. He fell asleep again, but why? He really needed to talk to Chieana or Ithidro. Or both. What the hell was going on with him!?

Ik hoop dat jullie ut een leuk stukje vonden^^ sunny
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Bericht van Chieana Strider wo apr 09, 2008 6:18 pm

Ik heb nog een stukkie!!!

Part 4

Thegolas woke up in the sick-bay. What had happend? He thought back. “O yeah, Chieana.”, he thought. Why did she had to rise up from the dead? Why? He hated her. He needed to protect Meckro from her. He hoped it wasn’t to late. Meckro still didn’t understood that all the dragon’s should be extinguished. Just like Chieana. He really hated that girl. He looked outside. It was evening. Good, then he had all time to talk to Meckro. He got dressed and walked outside. He felt where Meckro was. “One of the many useful things about twings.”, he thought with a grin. He climbed on the waterfal. He saw Meckro laying. He was unconscious. He saw a little dragon laying on Meckro’s lap. He frightened. He tried to attack the dragon, but it already heared him and ran off. “Meckro?”, Thegolas asked concerned. “Meckro, wake up!”, he said. “What’s wrong?”, Meckro asked. “What a stupid question!”, Thegolas thought. “Aren’t you hurt? It didn’t attack you?”, he asked. “No, what happend then?”, Meckro asked. This was the limit. “You were attacked by a dragon!”, Thegolas screamed. “It ran off before I could capture it, but I will find it!”, he said determined. Meckro sighed and walked back to the valley. Thegolas walked into the trees.he looked around in search for the dragon. He couldn’t find it. Swearing he walked away. He was back at the villa. He felt that Meckro was sleeping. What was going on with Meckro? Thegolas walked to the guest room. Before he entered he heared Meckro. “This is a dream”, he mumbled. After a few seconds he sighed. Thegolas entered the room. “What?”, his little brother asked now wide awake. “Nothing.”, Thegolas said and he walked, as fast as he could, to his dad. During his hasty trip, a lot of elves looked at him. Thegolas was never in a hurry. He was at his dad’s door. He knocked on the door. “Come in.”, growled his dad. His father sat with his back to him. “Meckro is acting strange dad.”, he started carefully. “I allready knew that!”, his father (snauwde). Thegolas swallowed. “He fell asleep twice this day.”, he said. “That’s because he’s weakend.”, his father said. Thegolas looked surprised at his dad. “He’s in love, that weakens him.”, his dad said. “You need to kill the girl.” Suddenly Meckro came in. “Where are you talking about?”, he asked.

Veel lees-plezier ^^ sunny
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Bericht van tess92 wo apr 09, 2008 6:35 pm

jeeej 2 stukkies

pale die gaat haar toch ni vermoorde???
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Bericht van Chieana Strider wo apr 09, 2008 6:40 pm

tja...daar komt u nog wel achter...*scary laugh*
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Bericht van tess92 wo apr 09, 2008 6:45 pm

ajajaj

ja zal ik mijn gedult wel bovenhale en mijn nieuwschierig heid
weg steke he
wnr nieuw stukkie Very Happy
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Bericht van Chieana Strider wo apr 09, 2008 6:48 pm

binnenkort....*doet mysterieuze move*
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Bericht van tess92 wo apr 09, 2008 6:59 pm

zal wel wachtte op stukkie
kan toch niets doen om u te late postte Smile
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Bericht van Chieana Strider wo apr 09, 2008 7:00 pm

hoe, nu ben ik nieuwsgierig
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Bericht van tess92 wo apr 09, 2008 7:11 pm

haha wie is er nu nieuwschierig Razz
ge zult wel zien
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Bericht van Chieana Strider wo apr 09, 2008 7:12 pm

ok,,,*kijkt alvast in alle gaten en in hoeken...*
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Bericht van tess92 wo apr 09, 2008 7:15 pm

Very Happy
en al iets gevonde in de gaten en hoeken
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Bericht van Chieana Strider wo apr 09, 2008 7:44 pm

nope nog nix...(kwas ff eten dus ben ff weggeweest van ut soeken xD)
miss dat ik nu wat vind...*gaat door met zoeken*
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Bericht van tess92 wo apr 09, 2008 8:19 pm

haha
wrs nog nix gevonde
en al een nieuw stukkie ff gevonde om te poste Very Happy
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Bericht van Chieana Strider wo apr 09, 2008 8:26 pm

nope, ik ben nog zwaar aant schrijven *waar dat zwaar voor staat kan zelfs een blondtje als ik begrijpen denk ik so Wink*
*is nog steeds nieuwschierig* sunny
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Bericht van Chieana Strider wo apr 09, 2008 8:26 pm

wanneer ga jij eigenlijk je onderschrift veranderen ? Razz:P
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Bericht van tess92 wo apr 09, 2008 8:31 pm

eum na dak alles heb gedaan vot school
das dus alles vo mijne toets praktijk zoekke
*wa lang ga dure na een week vakantie*
en dan gaak da doen
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