Spilled drinks (Engels)
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Spilled drinks (Engels)
Ik ben bezig met 'n nieuwe fanfiction (duh xD).
Het gaat dus over een meisje die in de pizzahut werkt, en tja xD.
hehehe.
Ik zit aan vijf stukken dus ik ga binnenkort posten, het is de bedoeling dat
het een lichte fanfic word, met niet al te veel zware problemen... alle, das de bedoeling
kweet ni of het zo gaat blijve ze xD want allee I love drama <3
Ja dus, wat denke jullie ^^?
Het gaat dus over een meisje die in de pizzahut werkt, en tja xD.
hehehe.
Ik zit aan vijf stukken dus ik ga binnenkort posten, het is de bedoeling dat
het een lichte fanfic word, met niet al te veel zware problemen... alle, das de bedoeling
kweet ni of het zo gaat blijve ze xD want allee I love drama <3
Ja dus, wat denke jullie ^^?
Laatst aangepast door Lari_TH op vr maa 28, 2008 12:50 am; in totaal 1 keer bewerkt
Gast- Gast
Re: Spilled drinks (Engels)
EEN (?) meisje, geboeld IK (gij dus )
heeft et al een stukje gelezen mihiiii leuk leuk, snel snel posteee
heeft et al een stukje gelezen mihiiii leuk leuk, snel snel posteee
Re: Spilled drinks (Engels)
Yay, eerste stukje ^^
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Hfdstk 1: Unexpected costumors
deel 1:
Najra got of the metro and walked across the street, the orchestal version of Spring nicht was running through her mp3 - player... Oh god, how she loved that version, it gave her goosebumps... She looked at her watch.
What? 7 o'clock already? She started running, Patrick wasn't going to be very happy...
it was 5 past 7 when she pushed open the door of the Pizza Hut... 'You're late!'
'I'm sorry... It won't... happen... again...' she answered, out of breath... Oh why did she have to work right now?
Now she can't go to the concert... Oh well, there will be other times, she said in herself
trying to cheer herself up. She walked to the changing room to put her uniform on, she put a ponytail in her hair and then checked herself in with her badge. The next hours didn't go very fast... It was crowded and she had a lot of work, but she missed the concert...
Just before her hours were up the phone rang... 'Yes, with the Pizza Hut, can I help you?' Leila picked up the phone. Najra waited, curiously, who could that be? It was 10 PM the Pizza Hut was actualy already closed...
'Hold on, I'll get the manager' Leila responden, that made Najra even more curious.
'Yes?' Patrick listened carefully, he frowned his eyebrows... 'I can organise that, yes... Ok that's good!'
He said and then he clapped is hands to get everybodys attention 'Listen up, people. Everybody is going to stay for another couple of hours, we have special guests coming!'
Najra sighed, why did that have to happen to her? She rolled her eyes. She started to set up tables again.
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Hfdstk 1: Unexpected costumors
deel 1:
Najra got of the metro and walked across the street, the orchestal version of Spring nicht was running through her mp3 - player... Oh god, how she loved that version, it gave her goosebumps... She looked at her watch.
What? 7 o'clock already? She started running, Patrick wasn't going to be very happy...
it was 5 past 7 when she pushed open the door of the Pizza Hut... 'You're late!'
'I'm sorry... It won't... happen... again...' she answered, out of breath... Oh why did she have to work right now?
Now she can't go to the concert... Oh well, there will be other times, she said in herself
trying to cheer herself up. She walked to the changing room to put her uniform on, she put a ponytail in her hair and then checked herself in with her badge. The next hours didn't go very fast... It was crowded and she had a lot of work, but she missed the concert...
Just before her hours were up the phone rang... 'Yes, with the Pizza Hut, can I help you?' Leila picked up the phone. Najra waited, curiously, who could that be? It was 10 PM the Pizza Hut was actualy already closed...
'Hold on, I'll get the manager' Leila responden, that made Najra even more curious.
'Yes?' Patrick listened carefully, he frowned his eyebrows... 'I can organise that, yes... Ok that's good!'
He said and then he clapped is hands to get everybodys attention 'Listen up, people. Everybody is going to stay for another couple of hours, we have special guests coming!'
Najra sighed, why did that have to happen to her? She rolled her eyes. She started to set up tables again.
Gast- Gast
Re: Spilled drinks (Engels)
oeeh
1ste fan xD
jee, Lari, ik hou wel van je schrijfstijl! je schrijft echt goed!
*neemt zich voor dit maal goed te blijven volgen zodat ze geen plots inhaalmanouvre moet doen*
xxx
EDIT: damm, 3de fan xD njah, ook goed
1ste fan xD
jee, Lari, ik hou wel van je schrijfstijl! je schrijft echt goed!
*neemt zich voor dit maal goed te blijven volgen zodat ze geen plots inhaalmanouvre moet doen*
xxx
EDIT: damm, 3de fan xD njah, ook goed
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Re: Spilled drinks (Engels)
DANKEEEEE xD
kheb wel wa hulp gehad, allee, niej bij het schrijve, maar zowa kleine foutjes, hehe schrijffoutjes ^^ *bloos bloos*
jaja, beta readers he xD
kheb wel wa hulp gehad, allee, niej bij het schrijve, maar zowa kleine foutjes, hehe schrijffoutjes ^^ *bloos bloos*
jaja, beta readers he xD
Gast- Gast
Re: Spilled drinks (Engels)
allee... nog een stukje... voor de wachtende zielen ^^
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deel 2:
An hour later a whole bunch off people entered the Pizza Hut... Najra rolled her eyes and then went back to
setting up tables again. They started picking up orders at the tables en Najra started serving drinks.
She had a big plate filled with drinks in her hand when 4 other guys came in, she didn't realy pay much attention to it, untill one of the guys bumped in to her plate. She startled an shrieked when she felt beer and lemonade all over her... She compulsevely started picking up pieces of glass...
'Oh, I'm sorry' The guy said, also covered in lemonade and all sorts of other drinks...
'Yeah, brother, you've done it again' the other guy laughed, she tought she recognised the voices, but she didn't realise it untill the clumsy guy bended and started helping with the glass.
She had a quick look to the guy's face and then started picking up glass again' It's ok you don't-'
She instantly stopped... Black long hair with blond locks in it? Eyebrowpiercing? BLACK MAKE-UP?
She looked up again at his face and then to the rest of the guys who were standing there, then she looked at the clumsy one again
She shook her head, 'Whoa...' The guy laughed 'Apparently I have that effect on a lot of people'
Najra's eyes became wider 'Apparently you have' She said, still shocked. 'I'm sorry about your clothes'
she started blushing 'It's okay, it's my fault anyway' He said, also blushing... He stood up and put
out his hand to pull her up
'Najra, you can stop after you cleaned that up' Leila said, from behind the bar.
'Did you eat already?' He asked 'No I didn't' Najra answered, still blushing
'Well, maybe you can sit with us? If you want to of course...' He smiled gently. Najra hesitated
Oh my god... Did Bill Kaulitz just ask her to sit with him, her eyes widenend again.
'Uhm... Yeah okay' she smiled. 'Great' Bill answered with a toothpaste smile and then he, Tom, Georg and Gustav went to their table. Najra started cleaning up, with a huge smile on her face.
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deel 2:
An hour later a whole bunch off people entered the Pizza Hut... Najra rolled her eyes and then went back to
setting up tables again. They started picking up orders at the tables en Najra started serving drinks.
She had a big plate filled with drinks in her hand when 4 other guys came in, she didn't realy pay much attention to it, untill one of the guys bumped in to her plate. She startled an shrieked when she felt beer and lemonade all over her... She compulsevely started picking up pieces of glass...
'Oh, I'm sorry' The guy said, also covered in lemonade and all sorts of other drinks...
'Yeah, brother, you've done it again' the other guy laughed, she tought she recognised the voices, but she didn't realise it untill the clumsy guy bended and started helping with the glass.
She had a quick look to the guy's face and then started picking up glass again' It's ok you don't-'
She instantly stopped... Black long hair with blond locks in it? Eyebrowpiercing? BLACK MAKE-UP?
She looked up again at his face and then to the rest of the guys who were standing there, then she looked at the clumsy one again
She shook her head, 'Whoa...' The guy laughed 'Apparently I have that effect on a lot of people'
Najra's eyes became wider 'Apparently you have' She said, still shocked. 'I'm sorry about your clothes'
she started blushing 'It's okay, it's my fault anyway' He said, also blushing... He stood up and put
out his hand to pull her up
'Najra, you can stop after you cleaned that up' Leila said, from behind the bar.
'Did you eat already?' He asked 'No I didn't' Najra answered, still blushing
'Well, maybe you can sit with us? If you want to of course...' He smiled gently. Najra hesitated
Oh my god... Did Bill Kaulitz just ask her to sit with him, her eyes widenend again.
'Uhm... Yeah okay' she smiled. 'Great' Bill answered with a toothpaste smile and then he, Tom, Georg and Gustav went to their table. Najra started cleaning up, with a huge smile on her face.
Gast- Gast
Re: Spilled drinks (Engels)
Ahhh ik wist het hea dat ze gingen langskomen
OMG ik zou ook ff verstomd staan als Bill voor me zou staan
Arhh ik zie hem al met zijn nageltjes glas oprapen zo heeeeel voorzichtig.
*ja sorry ik heb altijd ne levendige FF-fantasie*
xx
OMG ik zou ook ff verstomd staan als Bill voor me zou staan
Arhh ik zie hem al met zijn nageltjes glas oprapen zo heeeeel voorzichtig.
*ja sorry ik heb altijd ne levendige FF-fantasie*
xx
Re: Spilled drinks (Engels)
wanneer jullie aan p4 gerake xD
IK POST NI EERDER xD *kruist armen*
IK POST NI EERDER xD *kruist armen*
Gast- Gast
Re: Spilled drinks (Engels)
ok,ik wil vndaag ng aan p4 geraken,want zaterdag en zondag benk er ni (tot zondagavond)
dus IK WIL EEN STUKJE!
kben vrslaaaaafd!
SPAAAAAAAAAMM!!!!
dus IK WIL EEN STUKJE!
kben vrslaaaaafd!
SPAAAAAAAAAMM!!!!
Gast- Gast
Re: Spilled drinks (Engels)
yeah, weer ne nieuwe ff ! kheb tijd om wa te lezen nu, ben thuis tot en met maandag
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Re: Spilled drinks (Engels)
Lari_TH schreef:DANKEEEEE xD
kheb wel wa hulp gehad, allee, niej bij het schrijve, maar zowa kleine foutjes, hehe schrijffoutjes ^^ *bloos bloos*
jaja, beta readers he xD
idd *wijst subtiel op zichzelf*
Re: Spilled drinks (Engels)
spaaaaam
ik wil pg 4 xD
xxx
ik wil pg 4 xD
xxx
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